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Post by Kira & Lee Norris on Aug 24, 2007 16:43:59 GMT
Hi, everyone, I've been discussing this with Macy, but I just thought I'd post it in here as a side-light, so everyone knows what's happening...
Kira Norris, Head of the Spies at Orchid Hill, plans to send out her shadows and track down the kidnappers of Macy Deltine, Head of the Academics. She hopes to track them down, and hand them over to Macy, who will take her revenge. The main torturer of Macy will be discovered in a pub down in Cardsdale. Once they have found him, Kira herself will morph into the shadows and leave to make sure he matches Macy's physical description of him. Once she is certain she has found him, Macy can take over from there. She will finally close the chapter in Orchid history of her kidnapping in a truly fitting style. I also thought that there will also be another kidnapper found, whom Macy will take captive back to the school. Then they will be interviewed- possibly a teacher, the Headmaster or one of the Heads- and the school will recieve valuable information about what the enemy may be up to. Should the person commit suicide rather than live on as a prisoner?
Sorry, those last two paragraphs were pretty much spontaneous. If anybody else can think of a way to improve these plots, just reply to this. Also, Macy, tell me what you think of the last part.
Regards,
Kira Norris
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Post by Macy Deltine on Aug 24, 2007 17:23:02 GMT
Hey, Kira! I think the second part it really good, but it might provoke the enemy armies to attack or take more students, or something. But if something like it may happen, I'm sure we will be able to get enough information before anything major can happen. I'm pleased that this will finally end, and we can move on!
Thank you for your ideas!
-Macy x
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